This article is based on a webpage I wrote about Hans Rott on Tripod. I posted it here to Wikipedia, and I give permission for it to be used under the terms of the GNU Free Documentation License. --Alonso del Arte == Paragraphing == Very nice. Thanks for the contribution. My only comment is that it seems a lot like a standalone essay. I think this is mostly because of the paragraph breaks: it feels like a lot of words for only 3 paragraphs, for a Wikipedia article. I don't want to make it sound like I think you should butcher your article, but shorter paragraphs and a 2-3 sentence overview would make this seem a lot more approachable (to me, anyway) than immediately diving into 20 lines of solid text. And I don't want to turn people off, because it '''is''' well written. It's not hard to find, but a link to http://www.hans-rott.de/ might be nice. (They even have clips of some performance of his works.) (Anybody have any other pages worth linking to?) :Well, you know, you could always make those changes yourself - you know where the "edit this page" link is, right? ;) :For now, I'll put in that external link you suggest and have a go at a brief intro before we get into the bio. Any other work on the article would be gratefully received, I'm sure. --Camembert ::Well, I'm not really a writer. I just try to give good suggestions. :-) ::It looks great now. (That's a better intro than I probably would have written.) :::The first draft of this article was one of my earliest contributions to Wikipedia, when I didn't quite know Wikipedia's conventions. So I appreciate others taking the time to copy-edit this article according to the conventions of Wikipedia. Del arte 00:11, 20 Nov 2004 (UTC)