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Re: To^.i cho' gi`...
> > ma` vu+o+ng vo+'i va^'n,
> > nhu+~ng hi`nh bo'ng ho+.m hi~nh dda~ qua ro^`i.
> > Ha~y ngu+~ng ma(.t le^n ma` ca^'t bu+o+'c,
> > vu+o+ng hai tay ba('t vo'i ba^`u tro+`i cao.
> >
> > DDo+`i va^~n dde.p, va^~n xanh, va^~n cha`o ddo'n,
> > ddu+o+`ng ba.n ddi nhie^`u nga~ xinh tu+o+i.
> > Sao la.i cho.n con ddu+o+`ng ti`nh ai'?
> > vu+`a cho^ng gai, vu+a` he.p, vu+`a oai' oa(m!!!
> >
> > ttnt
>
> Dear "ttnt" (whoever you are),
>
> Thanks for the exuberant ideas, wacky though their
> expression seems. If I may tinker with the wordings
> of this "poem" to smooth it out a bit ... here's my
> derivative rendition of it. I hope that it won't
> do too much injustice to your vibrant original. :-)
>
> To^.i cho' gi` ma` pha?i vu+o+ng mo+'i va^'n
> nhu+ng bo'ng hi`nh ho+.m hi~nh dda~ qua ro^`i.
nhu+~ng (sorry about the typo!)
> Ha~y ngu+?ng ma(.t nhi`n le^n va` ca^'t bu+o+'c,
> vung hai tay ba('t vo+'i la^'y tro+`i cao#.
>
> DDo+`i va^~n dde.p, va^~n xanh, va^~n cha`o ddo'n,
> ddu+o+`ng ba.n ddi va^~n nhie^`u nga? xinh tu+o+i,
> ddu+o+`ng a'i ti`nh sao ba.n cho.n la`m gi`,
> vu+`a gai go'c, vu+`a oa'i oa(m, ha.n he.p?
>
> Oh well, no translation from me here. My "poetic
> inspiration" has run its course, and I can barely
> keep up with retouching this one. Believe it or
> not, I haven't managed to write a single line of
> "poetry" in Vietnamese in so long, I can't even
> remember when ....
>
> Vinh
>
>
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