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Re: To^.i cho' gi`...



Hey, "anh" Vinh, you are a good Vietnamese compiler. I came up w/ this "piece" 
(wouldn't dare to call it "poem" :-)) in just 5 minutes and besides that...
em mo+'i ho.c co' trung ho.c o+? VN thi` la`m sao tie^'ng Vie^.t cu?a em co' 
the^? bi` vo+'i dda`n anh dda~ tu+`ng bu+o+'c qua ngu+o+~ng cu+?a cu?a dda.i 
ho.c (ma` nha^'t la` la.i la` dda.i ho.c cu?a va(n chu+o+ng nu+~a :-))
No'i mia~ mai 1 chu't cho dzui tho^i chu+' ta`i vie^'t la'ch cu?a anh Vinh ma`
ai la.i kho^ng bie^'t dde^'n (ca'i na`y thi` khen thie^.t ddo' nghe :-))

Anyway, thanks for smoothing out my "poem" :-)
ttnt

> Dear "ttnt" (whoever you are),
> 
> Thanks for the exuberant ideas, wacky though their
> expression seems.  If I may tinker with the wordings
> of this "poem" to smooth it out a bit ... here's my
> derivative rendition of it.  I hope that it won't
> do too much injustice to your vibrant original. :-)
> 
> To^.i cho' gi` ma` pha?i vu+o+ng mo+'i va^'n
> nhu+ng bo'ng hi`nh ho+.m hi~nh dda~ qua ro^`i.

nhu+~ng  (sorry about the typo!)

> Ha~y ngu+?ng ma(.t nhi`n le^n va` ca^'t bu+o+'c,
> vung hai tay ba('t vo+'i la^'y tro+`i cao#.
> 
> DDo+`i va^~n dde.p, va^~n xanh, va^~n cha`o ddo'n,
> ddu+o+`ng ba.n ddi va^~n nhie^`u nga? xinh tu+o+i,
> ddu+o+`ng a'i ti`nh sao ba.n cho.n la`m gi`,
> vu+`a gai go'c, vu+`a oa'i oa(m, ha.n he.p?
> 
> Oh well, no translation from me here.  My "poetic
> inspiration" has run its course, and I can barely 
> keep up with retouching this one.  Believe it or 
> not, I haven't managed to write a single line of
> "poetry" in Vietnamese in so long, I can't even
> remember when ....
> 
> Vinh
> 
> 
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